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Trials: FEN - Page 20 (End) (Patreon)

Published:
2019-05-22 17:39:44
Imported:
2020-08

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Thank you all for supporting this comic! It has been a blast to run, and I'm so thankful for all of the work you all helped put into it.

Now we begin our next comic... Trials: SHOG

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TitanLeon (edited)

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2021-09-07 17:28:12 This has been such a treat to watch it being made &lt;3 Fen's guts look like a wonderful final destination &gt;///&gt;;; Man, I'm sad it's over! He's implying so much in that second-to-last panel there, I want moooar! xD
2019-05-22 18:18:17 This has been such a treat to watch it being made <3 Fen's guts look like a wonderful final destination >///>;; Man, I'm sad it's over! He's implying so much in that second-to-last panel there, I want moooar! xD

This has been such a treat to watch it being made <3 Fen's guts look like a wonderful final destination >///>;; Man, I'm sad it's over! He's implying so much in that second-to-last panel there, I want moooar! xD

Anonymous

Well, i actually need to leave a little honesty here. This was kind of unsatisfying. I subscribed to see the end of this comic and don't get me wrong, im glad that i did. But this page just feels like a mess... I realize you were going for a color theme with the text to allow separate character dialogue without the use of word balloons. But its hard to appreciate the page when that dialogue is spilling out into other panels, even more so with that neon green coming off so bright that it ends up being a huge distraction from the artwork. Then theres these internal shots. My first reaction to the 2nd panel was 'the hell?!' I couldn't make heads or tails of this white wolf's anatomy! Is that his torso, or is this a fore shortened shot going up his wrist? The longer i look at it the more it screws with my eyes. Then theres the fact that after building an imminent death up for 20 pages, this doesn't feel like an imminent death. Just a few pages ago we had the last meal screaming his head off begging for his life and this dude just kind of... whines. And finally, for a gut thats about to turn this guy into nutrient soup, it doesn't look very intimidating without the presence of any kind of green to hint at gastric juices. This is supposed to be a fatality, and it really doesn't seem all that fatal. Honestly i was hoping for more after all the build up. You seem like a good artist and i look forward to seeing you improve, but i got to spend my subscription money somewhere else. Good luck dude. No hard feelings.

vellum
>>22998509

I never said this comic was fatal vore, and in fact I’ve never done that genre and avoid it. While I appreciate your efforts in criticism, and I’m sure it was coming from a good place, I’m not asking for tips on comic creation, anatomy, or composition. I realize my faults and I’m working as best as I can to improve upon them, this is just my skill level at this point. I would ask in the future, at the very least give the artist the courtesy of conveying this in a private message unless asked to critique it. After 20+ months of hard work on a comic, it’s pretty crappy have a patron then publicly and patronizingly point out all of my faults in it. This is just my two cents, I sincerely appreciate the support you’ve given thus far. No hard feelings on my end either.

Anonymous
>>22998509

Why in gods green earth would i convey any of that in a private message? Im sorry but if you dont want your faults pointed out, then dont be an artist, and dont provide a service in exchange for currency. Secondly, i never said i expected fatal vore. I simply stated that the fatality and demise of this character didnt seem at all compelling or believable. As a fatal scenario, it didn't come off that way. Im sorry you felt patronized, but i dont think the front page should be all sunshine and compliments. I think honesty should stand firm and that vanity and pride can take a back seat every day of the week.

vellum
>>22998509

Sorry you feel the need to be this way for everyone to see. Hope you figure your own vanity and pride out one day.

Syis Keys
>>22998509

Disappointment in not receiving expectations (especially ones that weren't promised in any way, shape or form) is obscenely inappropriate to express in public denouncing of a person's career and/or passions. Harsh criticism is debatable, but implying someone must meet your demands in order to be an artist is beyond presumptuous. No hard feelings tagged at the end means nothing when a post is dripping with biting intent. Furthermore the criticism is simply only insulting when it's entirely unrelated to promised services. Nothing indicating the vore to be fatal means that not having a convincing demise of a character is not only tasteful but simply logical. I normally don't even respond to such malice as to not feed a flame, but I cannot even comprehend the arrogance behind your logic. "Logic." Rather than challenging each biting statement, I simply want to express my own honest criticism that your posts, especially your second one, negate any helpful intent you may have. Honest criticism isn't warranted from someone who is revoking support, either. There are plenty of artists you can follow, and the rest of us will stay here and support Vellum and their style that I quite frankly haven't ever felt anywhere else. I feel quite drawn in by Vellum's comic techniques and squirm to see what comes next because of the character this art has. I'll gladly increase my support to help cover any support you withdraw because I can't wait, personally, to see Vellum's art grow and progress. God knows I can't get enough of it as is, even if not every little "itch" I have is scratched by it. Finally, if an artist isn't asking for criticism on a private page, not only for respect to the artist but a private message will prevent you from disturbing the other viewers who have to get through your self-righteous mess to leave their own support that they pay to give. A private message will have every bit of power needed to convey your opinions to the artist, but posted here it is clearly intended to point things out to other people and to invoke a punishment for your failed expectations. Directly to Vellum, please take this as an attempt at supporting you, not continuing drama. I don't know if this person is even still here to read this, but you're not alone in your sentiments.