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A small delay on this one as I was trying to finish up the bonus story to go with it, but I figured you guys would need your Amy and Cathy fix haha. A bit of drama in this one but I assure you guys that the ending is in sight and there's tons of sexy hypnotic play to come. Hope everyone enjoys :)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/09aulevopdhi61w/Falling%20chapter%2022.pdf?dl=0

Comments

Sheenariel

There is an ending? Nooooooo!

sammynona

Don't worry, it's going to be about 8 chapters away, with lots of fun stuff in between haha

ParagonRocky

"Gina blinked. 'Huh, I guess that would explain the orgies.'" I burst out laughing at that. Like this is the first time she ever considered that group sex parties aren't a normal high school occurrence.

larqven

This was a wonderful story! Gina has proven that she really has what it takes to be leader in her ability to get to the bottom of things. She started out as an antagonist and might be Amy's most useful friend. Amy's power can have good unintended consequences as well as bad. I've wondered if Amy's power tends to find and unshackle the good in people rather than the bad? Even so, Eva isn't too screwed up, but it served as a cautionary example of what those subconscious desires can do. Amy might be upset about Cathy, but she should have been afraid of what Cathy might do if cut off from her fixation forever. I was afraid that Cathy might become a suicide! Well, I figured that Cathy might find a way to tug at Amy's heartstrings from afar as she's a clever--and strong--girl despite being a submissive. I didn't foresee her finding a Dom so soon! Amy still needs to learn that removing programming doesn't remove after-effects on the psyche. A lot of Amy's subjects might suffer bizarre or obsessive behavior even after being freed. I'm glad that Gina was there to both console her and get her to realize that just cutting people off is selfishness as well. Cathy might not be able to become normal and able to keep herself safe right now. Would she have become a lesbian and so openly submissive without Amy? I don't know, probably nothing like what has happened. But even without programming, that's what Cathy has become. Also, if Gina was terrible and now much better, what about Diana? Especially as Diana might be even more screwed up than Cathy? It might depend on how much Diana's subconscious took to the programing. Cathy seems to have had a submissive side that liked to perform and please.

Ed Fiskel

I'm excited to see where this goes. When FFHT is finished I hope Succubus Cheat Sheet gets some love.

larqven

Another point and potential loose end is Sharon, Cathy's track friend from the "Alternative Beginning", 'Bad End' chapters. Even in the 'main timeline', Sharon would be expected to have watched her copy of the episode with geek girl Beth. Presumably, Cathy would have either explained the situation to her, or covered it up, or Sharon never revealed that she saw an inexplicable amateur sex video and is still wondering about it?

sammynona

Sharon was added in simply so that in the alternate universe we have some more action to enjoy. Otherwise if Amy just wins out over Cathy its hot but more or less business as usual haha. In this world Cathy didn't have the foresight to share the video with anyone, since subconsciously her desire was to get close enough to Amy to be taken advantage of again. I haven't been able to find Sharon a place in the main timeline but she may be able to show up at some point lol

larqven

Thanks for the info. I expected as much, there isn't much story without conflict, after all. Although, you have done a pretty good job just with emotions and riled up mothers and chaotic students. The alternative story was presented as if the only difference is that Amy stared at the mirror for a second or so less, which made me wonder. I'm looking forward to how you tie this story up!