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This series got held up a bit with everything going on but it's time to get back into the action as we head towards the big conclusion. Will anyone make it out? Do you even want to see the girls escape Amber's clutches?  

https://www.dropbox.com/s/a61brxewc7yji9x/EC%20chapter%2018.pdf?dl=0

As always comment and discuss below, and I hope you enjoy as I work hard to give this series the finale it deserves, which will hopefully come soon!

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Abby Gail

We ever gonna see more from the Curse of the Snake Goddess? It's been a good long while.

John

Very nice, Sammy!!!! I definitely love the new Maria. I will love it when Rebecca is FFIIIIINNAALLYYYYY a slave. Amber standing tall with ALL of them bowing at her feet their foreheads pressed into the carpet! Also, Will you publish the whole rest of the rwby story that you are writing for the commission? I would love to read that one. Also, what about the rest of Witch's Dream? Ready for new commissions soon?? love ya darlin!!

Chris Wiley

I sooooo want to see Rebecca enslaved by Amber. And I'd love to see Amber standing over them all, triumphant, and all of them worshiping her at her feet. I also love that even tho some slaves have feelings for other girls, they can't help but betray the one's they love so Amber gets her way.

larqven

Well, Amber wanted some more excitement. One might think that she'd probably want to head of to bed!

larqven

As it is, Amber has got what she's seemingly wanted, a chase between the two of them. Usually, this results in Amber getting more beat-up. She's a danger junky, and its going to get her burned, sooner or later. __________________________ There might be reinforcements coming, but it might be just as likely that Ashley might be held up by Maria. Maria turning Amber's slaves against her? Who'd a thought it? Well, a number of readers did, even back in the brainwashing room, but it seemed impossible. Until Amber helped make it possible. It also looks like Amber is finally experiencing the dissonance of control and action which Amy did with Cathy. Also, slaves able to disobey when they view what their mistress would really want more. ______________ Ashley was fun in the 'makeup' session with Rebecca. She also having some disdain for Maria's performance, but a willingness to go along with it. Maria herself perhaps not so fooled to think that she's had free will in her choices, but having too much fun to care. Plus, her switch from dominant to submissive in quick succession, and masterful control of the slaves given to her. Perhaps learning more about control than Amber? _______________________________ Chapter 18 errors: Rebecca watched the strange banter between the two with confusion and heart break [heartbreak] on her face. (page 9) "A real shame." Rebecca [Ashley] put an arm around Amber, resting her head against the shoulder of her Goddess. (page 17) Ginger was charging out of the lounge to go after Rebecca when Maria suddenly shouted, "Maria [Ginger], you have permission to kiss and worship my feet!" (page 19) Then she broke into [a] perverted grin as she dove for the floor, (page 20) You should be careful about unleashing all your slaves [slaves’] pent up desires. (page 20)

HardhatDoozer

Finally moved up from the $2 level to the $5 level. I forsee catching up on “Sibling Rivalry” in my future. Glad I could move my support up finally.

larqven

Though I wanted Amy to win in the other story, I wonder what it would be like to have a reversal here? In a sense, Rebecca can't really win by getting away, but only by taking down Amber. Already with no small help from Maria who has become a new mistress with her ersatz powers. As it is, Amber has already proved her nature as a reckless risk taker, many times over this evening. She's already been beaten and knocked out by Rebecca once already! She's expressed her disdain for being careful. She's a danger-junkie and seems to be looking for defeat. Now, she willingly, almost gratefully, has left her 'winnings' behind, and is running off to face Rebecca alone, again, one more time. She's truly tempting fate this time, much as she's been doing all evening. Since she's been 'just begging for it' so hard, I'm wondering if Rebecca and/or Maria ought to pull off a win -coup d'état- after all? For Amber's own good, of course! I've thought more than once that Amy and Amber could probably use a good enslaved personal assistant. A nanny mistress might be better? I've sort of seen Amber as a 'What If' of what Amy might have become in short order without her power being checked once. Apparently a we get a girl who wants to be checked? A goddess to be worshipped, but not obeyed?