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EAC Chapter 16 (Patreon)

Published:
2018-06-11 21:19:21
Edited:
2020-04-23 23:31:11
Imported:
2021-06

Content

The chase is back on, and it's clear that we're coming towards the endgame. Just who's going to make it out on top? Read on to find out :)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/g3lj5oftmhlq7md/EC%20chapter%2016.pdf?dl=0

As always comment and discuss below!

Comments

Zelkova Tatl

I love this chapter especially the touch with both of their breasts smooshing Maria's head. Was simply hot and sexy and beautiful.

larqven

Spoilers *********************** Great stuff, as per usual. Jade the robot--who wasn't a robot. I liked how she totally ignored Rebecca and Maria until they said something Jade found useful, and then her spontaneous leap onto the table, suggesting great strength. The business of Jade running endlessly between the two was funny. I wasn't surprised that Jade took after Maria first, indeed, as she had been chasing after her for some time in the gardens, and her commands from Amber might have put Maria on the priority list if confronted with the two of them. But she did seem to be lost between the two of them; but then again, WHO was really trapped? There's a cheerleader team actively searching for them, time is NOT on their side! The girls not fooling around quite like they were before. Nice to see Emma at least look threatening! She'd likely be Amber's enforcer who is there for show. Jade has had more success, but, being mind-bent towards being a single-minded drone has its disadvantages as well. I liked how Jade is fairly beat up and scratched up. Indeed, if she had really run naked into rose bushes, it would be more than a little damage to her skin. Rose bushes are no joke, and being mindless and not influenced by pain could be a bad combination. Loved the uncertain nature of the props as it made for some good comedy relief. The rubber sword (which was quite useful), and the silly gun which turned out not to be a useless prop and actually quite useful. At least Jade's more advanced mind is still intact, but a trance state imposed on her so as to keep her moving. But such a thing had its clear limitations as she was as much toy as hunting machine, let alone a 'champion'. Amber has some remedial work to do on the mind bent slaves she already has. But we did learn more about Amber's power in this chapter. Her well of power does indeed get low even from a single encounter, although it does seem to refill quite quickly. But the aspect of touching Amber's breasts being her most powerful, and most intricate and subtle, use of her power. Indeed, Amber CAN act as a telepath when having sex and in the midst of orgies. The 'Heather and Amber Showdown For the Best Breasts' got a bit of replay here! But in a much more cooperative way, what with the nerd girl Maria getting enveloped in the sandwich! I wonder if the three of them will now share a special connection? It will be interesting to see how this all plays out as we are heading towards the conclusion. It was probably good for Amber's ego that her sense of drama has borne some fruit again. Given her preparations, and the presence of the other girls outside the dining room, I wonder if this was more of a trap and herding exercise set up? Presumably Ashley detecting the girls in the dining room before Jade hunted Maria down? It might be interesting with some more prose of Maria's flight from Jade in the garden and woods? It has a "The Shining" potential to it. Albeit, we have enough incidental comments about it to at least guess towards the experience. Maria apparently being aware of Amber putting the additional whammy on Jade, and Jade apparently running into rose bushes. Anyway, good stuff! Amber has apparently not given up her thespian career, despite the reversals she's suffered. I'm interested to see what she's planning.

larqven

Oh, I forgot to paste in the errors: Chapter 16 She tried to run, but the handcuffs went taught [taut] and bit into her wrist. (page 9) She reminded Maria of one of those wind up [windup] toys that got tipped over and just kept flailing on it's [its] side, doing it's [its] best (page 14) back onto it's [its] pedestal and turning to escape. (page 14) She felt the mad urge to run up and threw [throw] herself at Heather's chest, (page 15) the half-formed though [thought] scattering away into oblivion. (page 25)

John

this may well be the best damn chapter of the whole story. Can't wait to meet the new Maria.

larqven

I found another error: "You're [your] body belongs to me now. Isn't that right?" (page 18) Also, the return of 'Maria who hunts for weapons on the fly' and 'Maria the Domme' was pretty cool. I was wondering if Jade was sort of mistakenly left in trance early on, leaving her 'mindlessly devoted to her mission', but still subject to some suggestions. Largely due to her running back and forth and taking the 'advice' to jump on the table. The rubber slap knocked her out of trance and supposedly back to her senses. However, she slipped back under which makes me wonder if the trance effect was like a hypnotic overlay to her personality? At least Jade's mind isn't overtly wrecked.

Chris Wiley

I am soooooo rooting for Amber!!!!

John
>>13174026

So am I. I was on her side from the intro!!!

ParagonRocky
>>13023452

That scene was in the story from the very first plot outline and I'm ecstatic it survived all the way through to now.