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7/24/2017: EAC Chapter 7 (Patreon)

Published:
2017-07-25 01:26:29
Edited:
2020-04-23 23:13:21
Imported:
2021-06

Content

Newest chapter coming in a little late due to time off to go to the Entranced convention, but it is here all the same. Bonus chapter is coming in a little bit, and the last update should still be on the 31st. Hope you all enjoy as the action really starts to heat up in this series. Feel free to comment below :)

 https://www.dropbox.com/s/zgexxejxb3fl4d8/EC%20chapter%207.pdf?dl=0 

Comments

ParagonRocky

Ooh, it's been too long. ☺ I'm liking the split focus chapters, where we're getting two mini-cliffhangers in different situations. It's keeping us guessing about which character's going to go the distance, and keeps track of where everybody is. Right now the only characters we're not sure about are Amber, who's probably taking her sweet time, and Ashley, who's been MIA since the whole thing started. Jade's quite the pro-active heroine! Her plan was clever, if not exactly foolproof. ;) It's raising a question in my mind if the lesbian tendencies of each character were always there, of it's a by-product of being in proximity to Amber. I'm actually starting to ship different pairings among the cast. Good thing there's an even number. Fun fact: I forgot the combo on my apartment's storage locker padlock and tried to smash it open with a hammer. It did not work as well as it does in the movies. I'm kinda surprised this didn't occur to Rebecca or Jade to get the car keys out, but it's probably because they didn't want to make noise or didn't have time to consider the option. I would think Jade probably still has her own car keys on her though, but maybe she put them down somewhere. Amber really put a lot of thought into this! She's got an employee training video, ffs. XD I guess that's just a logistical thing, where she doesn't have the time to do the groundwork herself while she's hunting everyone down, so she just pre-taped a video with one of Ashley's dad's cameras (or just a cell phone, it is 2017 after all) and put it up on a TV. If her powers worked on a digital screen I think she'd be a bit overpowered... We're at the approximate halfway point for my commission, so while so far we've lost one cheerleader per chapter, the remaining girls are going to be more capable by default and will definitely put up more of a challenge. Maybe one of the girls actually will manage to escape, only to find that she sounds ridiculous when she tries to tell anyone what happened, and just ends up ambushed by Amber when they go home one day or end up in the locker room alone. It sure does paint a bleak picture when you think about that. :S

larqven

Nice new chapter! The business of Rebecca and Jade not trusting each other and then both failing the 'Feel-Up Test' was amusing. Particularly what with getting caught in the act by Ginger and Emma. I really like how the slaves don't act as drones and are much themselves, but now, quite a bit different as their values have been totally skewed. The garage scene made for a good place to hide and play 'keep away'. At least once the light's were taken out. I'm not sure that smashing the box would be nearly so easy, but it made for a dramatic moment. Jade remains quite the bad-ass, maybe the girl who was the 'crazy girl' on the team, maybe more than just being zany or doing daring and inadvisable things. The business of Maria acting more brave was interesting and welcome. It is interesting that Heather was completing her brainwashing in the spare bedroom. Presumably Amber did so before the girls arrived, or did so before the second group of girls arrived as the house is big enough to do stuff like a speech without being detected. I don't know, it would make sense that Amber might have such a recording on hand--just in case. On another, it would be dangerous to have, and I sort of like the idea of Amber wanting to use the mansion's equipment after getting her own grand tour. I liked that Maria has some resistance to Heather's advances. I'm sure that a group of girls will have exclusively straights who will have a great deal of motivation to avoid being turned by mind control! Of course that means that Maria is caught in a dilemma: pretend well, or be zapped for real. The problem aside, Maria was quick on her feet, surprisingly daring, and smart to try and 'hide amongst the enemy'. She might be taking on aspects of the 'regular girl protagonist' now? Or nerdy girl getting brave as the situation calls for that? Certainly she started to think heroically and acted bravely with no one by her side. There is some irony in that mind controlled Heather is 'free to be herself'. She might be a lesbian slave--but she doesn't have to be such a mean girl anymore! It's one of the things I like about your writing is that you give your characters real personalities and think of their altered behavior beyond the fetish fun. And, I always like the different categories of girls brought together, interacting, and getting edited into another category perhaps, but not leaving it too far behind. Example: Nerd girl turned into more of a 'Geek' as she opens up to--say--Sci Fi or Fantasy Pop culture; or 'Hipster' as she becomes more personable and socially conscious. Well, a chapter where no new slaves were gained, but we got to see Heather doing her 'self reinforcement' and plenty of Hi-Jinks!

ParagonRocky

Hey, EAC fans! Artist I hired just finished Chapters 3-5 of the illustrations! See the album here: <a href="http://kaywest.deviantart.com/gallery/63360361/COLLEGE-SEDUCTION-SERIES" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://kaywest.deviantart.com/gallery/63360361/COLLEGE-SEDUCTION-SERIES</a>

larqven
>>6504804

I liked the profile drawings of Ashley licking Amber's shoes, and Towering Emma looking down with Amber's grip on her hair braid! I'd forgotten about the cloak business! The reflection and words on the mirror were pretty cool.

ParagonRocky
>>6504804

The cloak was a nice costume to introduce the slasher-flasher concept, but by now I'm not sure if she's still wearing it. She had it in the ballroom with Heather but discarded it, so it remains to be seen if she's going to stick with it all night or change up her wardrobe. The artist did a pretty great job, especially with the bathroom mirror reflection. At this point we're only two chapters behind the written story, so after I commission the next pair of illustrations we'll have to be patient and wait for the rest of the story to catch up. 😅