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[WIP] Parental Rehearsal [Page 04] (Patreon)

Published:
2021-06-04 19:43:30
Imported:
2021-06

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And here's the sketch of page 4, hope you'll like it!

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Anonymous

Looks great! Two things though. I think it would be "Last time you said you were afraid 'you felt' incompetent or inexperienced as a dad" as well as I would say Roleplay is more of a verb than a noun so "A roleplay" sounds odd, I would just say Roleplay instead of A Roleplay

Anonymous

Great to more of this comic so quickly :3

Anonymous
>>61243533

I would say that "....do a little roleplay..." sounds alright in this context. It sounds like its a small amount of the activity, like "do a little running." If you do change it Soap, go with "....do some roleplay..."

Anonymous

My suggestion would be "you were afraid to feel"

Anonymous

I'm looking forward to the new series of comics :)

Anonymous

you have typo's my friend. please correct them in the final print.

Anonymous
>>61271156

If Soap has typos that you see let him know early so he can change it if you see them. He encourages people to do it.