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[WIP] Shits and Giggles [Page 08] (Patreon)

Published:
2020-04-02 18:49:03
Imported:
2020-06

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And another page of the comic, featuring the other heroines, hope you'll enjoy!

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Anonymous

First panel should maybe say "That was the first of a long series" or "This is the first in a long series," either works! The second speech bubble could also be written as "It's only a matter of time before you turn like your friends," or "before you become like your friends." Hope this helps, once again loving your work, Soap ^_^

nottheking

I think, instead of "That was the first of a long series", it could be "That was the first of many". Just a less awkward way of saying it in English, I know language differences can be troublesome at times. The post above me fixed everything else to my knowledge. I don't know if its planned, but it would be pretty cute if Squirrel Girl and Ms. Marvel's diapers had babyish designs instead of medical ones on them to show how far they've regressed and what awaits our current unfortunate heroine. That pic you did of Squirrel Girl in what I'm presuming is this scenario is one of my all-time favorites! Can't wait to see more!

Anonymous

I didn't see anyone correct "Aren't you excited?" instead "exited" yet.

Anonymous

Digging the comment, looking forward to more... that said, I hate to be that nerdy guy, but aside from the English notes from other posts; squirrel girl is missing her tail >.> having a giant squirrel tail is one of her powers

Anonymous

Yes! Squirrel girl needs her tail!

Anonymous

The drool! Oh gods you need to add that more often!