Visual Novel Demo (Patreon)

Guys, I wanted to try something new. And would love some feed back. As mentioned before I was looking to for better ways to make a story more interesting and involving, One of the ways was to try to make a Visual Novel that uses my Renders. 

This is a small demo (for Windows)I made in about 2 days. It its Femdom Oriented as per the story/text written by Irene Clearmont. You can have a look at her website.

http://www.missireneclearmont.com/

Key Notes regarding the demo

1. This was very quick work ( It took me like about 10 hours) I just started using the software on Saturday. I will definitely put scenes like how I do for my normal renders.

2. The music is pretty lame and I can do better , I just picked a few out of youtube. Same with the sound effects.

3. There is a lot I can do, but this is a low priced game engine and software with not many options. ( Have used the default stuff like main menu, fonts, rendered Images are all quick etc ) Yet to explore all features.

4. This is for windows, but I can make android/ios/mac versions too

It can be fun to read while travelling and it does help enhance a novel to some degree especially in the visual department

Would love Some feedback

Cheers