Home
Artists
Search Recent Random
Posts
Search DMs Popular Hash Lookup Tags Random
Importer
Import FAQ
Register
Partychan Telegram Find&Fuck Waifus ThePornDude
Home Artists Posts Import Register

Under Lock & Key, chapter 3, page 13, final page (Patreon)

Published:
2018-11-10 17:59:59
Imported:
2022-01

Content

And we've already reached the conclusion of this chapter. I sincerely hope you all enjoyed it! ^_^ I will keep you up to date about the progress of the next chapter!

Under Lock & Key was written by Peculiar Changeling. Art by me!

Read all previous installments of this comic here: https://hofbondage.deviantart.com/gallery/63524697/Under-Lock-and-Key 

Peculiar Changeling and his work can be found here: http://peculiarchangeling.deviantart.com 

This comic is also (with a 2 week delay) posted on my Tumblr: https://hofbondage.tumblr.com 

Files

Comments

Allen Harris

A criticism, if I may, that I hope is taken as constructive, since I love your work; this has been an interesting comic so far -> but I don't really see much of a conflict. Conflict is what makes stories interesting. Sure, she's embarrassed about the diapers. Sure, she wants to make daddy happy. But the plot feels a little flat. Just an observation. Great artwork so far - always a pleasure to see your work!

hofbondage
>>17049293

Thank you for the observation. I don't feel offended. You may be a little bit right.... Personally, I feel the conflict is happening in Jenny's own mind as she slowly surrenders to the limitations of her situation. But I do agree it's not enough. Happily, this was only chapter 3 of what will likely be a 10 chapter story. And I know some conflict is about to happen in the next few chapters. So thank you for your very welcome constructive criticism. We will try to take it to heart! :-)