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You neighbor comes over to check on your dogs... which is odd since you are home and you never actually talked to your neighbor before...

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Anonymous

that reveal of the record at end got me so good

Artey

I really like those stories where at the end it's revealed that you're an evil mastermind and have been lying to and manipulating the listener all the time. And since you made a few of those stories, I guess you like them, too. (Can't escape your yandere is my favourite story of yours.) That said, I have one little issue with this. In the title it already says the neighbour is a yandere. That hurts the believability of what she says and made it predictable that there will be a twist at the end. I already suspected that she lied, stole the keys and that the cheating is the other way around. It didn't ruin the story for me and a recording is more creative than the usual kidnapping, but the protagonist doesn't have this knowledge and I think the listener shouldn't either. Oh, and I guess one detail that goes unmentioned is that you planted the recording device when you supposedly went to the bathroom. Sneaky.