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Cursed Conduit - LitRPG Apocalypse (Patreon)

Published:
2024-02-26 18:39:00
Imported:
2024-02

Content

Cursed items were meant to have drawbacks. Not for Gris.

On an ordinary day, Gris commutes to his monotonous office job via train. But when the System arrives, terraforming earth beyond comprehension, so does a Gacha System, leading him to summon his first creature—a Half-Star Cockroach. While others receive powerful spirits and awesome companions, Gris faces an unexpected adversary. His own pet. Which he defeats, gaining its skills.

With an undying tenacity, and a Class: Cursed Conduit that wields vast, violent energy, and the ability to unlock cursed items, Gris will fight anything in his path to ultimate power.

Let me know what you think of the story. It is a weak to strong to OP, focusing on a juggernaut MC that takes a lot of damage, and uses Cursed Energy to not only strengthen him, but to unlock cursed items.

There will be mistakes. This is a first draft. Feel free to mention them in the comments.

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Up to chapter 22 for the new story.

Monster Jousting chapter out tomorrow. Back to posting Blood Weaver on Wednesday.

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Cursed Conduit - LitRPG Apocalypse (Patreon)

Comments

Steven Kendrick

"For Gris, he defeated his own targets in two or three heads to the head. He didn’t Level up." Pretty sure that's meant to be Hits to the heads, yes?

SilencetheHunger
>>130772158

Ah, yeah. Meant to be hits. It's just a first draft, I'm wanting some first impressions on the story. What do you think of it so far?

Mogwai

I like it so far, but many parts in the last few chapters don't fit in with the rest of the story. It reads more like you copied a lot over from the previous cursed conduit post with the other character. Often it wasn't clear what was happening with his summon, if he is still there or not, and his use of killing the enemy with the generator didn't feel in line with Gris's character, previously Gris always charged headlong into combat and didn't set such an elaborate trap. He does show that he is smart but it felt like a large jump in how he fights in my opinion. Maybe add some introspection from Gris in regards to how he can improve his fighting or him realizing that he ought to fight smarter, not harder

SilencetheHunger
>>130811235

Thanks so much! Yeah, I recycled some of the chapters later on so that's spot on. Introspection sounds like a really good idea. Do you like it more than the previous Cursed Conduit? I do prefer writing the apocalypse. A lot more straightforward for me haha