Redraw - SophiaN (Patreon)

Hello!

This time I'm adding a few comments;

I'll bypass most of the changes that revolve around me just improving on anatomy, posing and gesture elements over 3 years, the thing that made me want to go back on this pic was the fact that it had some good composition elements, but so muted and weak that they didn't come together.

First off I tweaked the layout, made the main pose take up 50%+ of the real estate and had the sub-pose and the closeup play off of the dynamics that change set. 

It's cluttered! Clutter is fine if you have things to latch onto in a comp to provide guidance to the eye and grounding to the whole. This is why I split the pic in two halves, diagonally so as not to make it too rigid. Sub pose with the cookie is mirrored so it contrasts and feels pressed towards the center line (promiscuity is good for organic stuff), working with the diagonals that make everything slide inwards.

The rest of the main shift is a more bold approach to blacks and shading, something I'm generally experimenting with these days, as well as a total replacement of the closeup frame by something a bit more abstract that doesn't distract from the rest of the comp.

Thematically, expressions have more going on! Sophia is kind of a hardass bitch so she wouldn't be all coy, she goes from annoyed arousal to unhinged "have my love juice cookies" in a more direct way.

Here we go, tell me if you enjoy me going into more detail, of course you can ask for more in the comments!