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Chels

I'm so excited~~~~~ I love this one so much~ also I'm thinking she wants to change the entire set up of the characters because akane was saying how everything was supposed to be like a slow development of their relationships and such, but it became peppy and upbeat to match the speed of being a play, and the main character is basically ruined because of it. That's my guess that she wants the whole tone to change. But now I'm so curious what books yall were talking about~ lol that's one problem I have with editing my friends stories. there was one she was working on that was fantastic and I was SO invested! But because she got bored of writing it, she cut the climax off at the knees, destroyed the whole build up and left me so empty that I told her I wasn't going to edit that chapter until she gave me the rest of the plot she originally intended to do, so I could write the ending for her. It was just so bad. It was almost like "He frantically ran up to her doorstep, rain pouring loud in his hears. He slammed on the wood panel once then twice, then out of the darkness.. she popped out the door and they got married and lived happily ever after!" 😂

Thomas Lubac

Ruby is incredible. So, just because Aqua would be in a relationship with Akane for professional reasons, he would be considered an enemy of women? I have a hard time understanding how he is an enemy of women when, on the contrary, he has proven that he knows how to take care of them and even save them (like Akane during her suicide attempt). (français)