Taking a Dip Pages 15-16 *WIP Sketches* (Patreon)

Odd thing happened here. In the bottom panel of the first page, i actually kept most of the initial concept sketch to the finished sketch, which is something I very rarely do. However when I tried to recreate it from scratch, the new version just looked like shit. After thinking about it for a while, I finally accepted that I have to scrap the new version and instead have to use the original concept sketch. The pose, the perspective, the expression(even though I modified it a bit in the final version) was just too good and I couldn't recreate it.

I also made her lose her wet hair in the second page. Honestly I think I would have preferred to keep her hair wet, but I also felt like I do it too often with my character designs. Due to involving body fluids a lot of characters get wet in my comics, and since I like to keep it somewhat realistic, I make their hair be affected, which results in many characters looking a bit different before and after the sex parts. Same with the guy in this comic, originally his hair is mostly brushed to the back, but due to being in the water it's now covering his forehead more. Makes me think "What was the point of the original character design, If i change it just 2 pages in?", thus I try to at least make the fairy go back to her original design...even though I liked the wet look.

Also I really like the dialogue in the second page, which, of course, you don't see... so I will talk about it once the finished page is done haha. Though I guess it's possible you could try to guess what she is saying here based on these panels.