Dream Come True - Page 14 (Patreon)
Published:
2019-11-14 18:23:05
Edited:
2020-06-20 09:09:25
Imported:
2021-04
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Hmm...this is based on a story that was submitted to the contest some time ago(i should start a new contest soon) which of course has a lot of "narration". I wonder if leaving ALL of it out was a good idea. I kinda feel like it wouldn't work with the way i want to the story to go, but at the same time a lot of things remain unexplained. Like why her tongue is stretching out and pulling up. It's a reflex of hers to keep him from being swallowed too fast.