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Here is the finished new chapter! As reminder, you can read the rest of the series on mangadex.

https://mangadex.org/title/65512e8c-71c6-4143-ab88-1f62942e7dd2/ramia-yana

You can read it here: https://www.patreon.com/posts/ramia-yana-16-lq-113253651

Or in HQ for tier 3-4: https://www.patreon.com/posts/ramia-yana-16-hq-113253649

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DivineDragonFelgrand 4123

Does the name Osumihime mean something, in fact does her whole name mean something

Manga furie

Hell yeah!!!! This chapter was so good. J'espère pouvoir un jour maîtriser autant le découpage, le cadrage des planches et la dynamisation des scènes que toi, car wow, c'est magnifique et je n'ai pas les mots, pour le dessin, c'est tout simplement de l'art visuel. Merci beaucoup, tu me donnes tellement de motivation.

thegoldensmurf

Merci! ça me prends du temps mais je suis définitivement fier du résultat haha. L’aspect de visibilité des cases est aussi un point important dont je porte beaucoup d’attention.

thegoldensmurf

Absolutely. It can be split in 3 parts. The O is basically an old fashioned honorific for women in traditional Japan. Sumi means ink. And Hime means princess. Her name basically means Princess Ink.

DivineDragonFelgrand 4123

As a fan of japanese swords, I did notice that the O can also be used to say "Great"

Jotaro Kujo

in chapter 1.4 isn't there a bunch missing on the rescuing of the girls on mangadex (and also ( priestess just getting the handwavey oh she got addicted and is now a bad person feels kinda sideye-y presentation wise then again im missing a few pages of context and also i'm just a reader seemed kinda hand waved off ish)

thegoldensmurf

Don’t think there is anything missing. However I honestly regret a number of things regarding the start, and the priestess is one of the things that were badly executed, which I’d like to tweak in a redrawn version of the intro arc. But basically she was a psycho to begin with. It was my first real attempt at writing proper manga chapters back then so there were issues.

Jotaro Kujo

Thank you for responding so quick idk why but i thought i was gonna get thrashed for my opinon ;-; this is actually my reread of this cause i remember loving it and want to refresh (mainly cause i rlly love malhory) UR DRAWING IS PEAK im confident ur redrawn version will be even better!!! and in turn a bit longer which means more peak!!! also question are there any non weirdo other worlder travellers?

thegoldensmurf

I’d had various things in plan to improve snd expand the start yeah. There won’t be any plot breaking retcons, mostly just better execution and expansions on a number of characters and concepts. In ch1 Ramia mentioned that there, for plot reasons they’re « seemingly » weirdos and Kevin from ch15 is already a rare case of a more acceptable type of weirdo lol.

Jotaro Kujo

oh it was chapter 2.1 ~A Hero's town~ The old Hero (part 1) istg i have memories of her actually getting in their and checking the place out and talking to the girls and generally checking the weirdos into backing down in this she instantly is holding someone you also say in the comments how u lost ur data (ALSO ALSO i remember the redrawings also being up with the og maybe im actually having false flashbacks tho) KEVIN THE GOAT (i wouldn't kidnap people tho) if im wrong about the chapter thing ill just zip it tho also a jail cell box like in one piece with zoro in the cage!!

thegoldensmurf

Lol yeah I had a big data loss back then because I wasn’t careful yet so I lost all the layers files of ch1. Not a big deal at this point. Not sure what you tried to say regarding the redraws at the end?

Jotaro Kujo

i was saying how they were both up at the same time the non redrawn and the redrawn versions and how i remember something else happening in the original drawings one i read in case it helped u remember well good thing it won't be a problem!!! (also am i remembering properly? because i don't know what a layer file is)

thegoldensmurf

I’m pretty sure I made some redraws comparisons as bonus as the end of later chapters, could be what you mean. Layers files are the original files on which I made the pages. Each drawings were separated from the panels and bubbles so they wouldn’t affect each others.

Jotaro Kujo

I think i just invented some memories of what happened in the cave don't mind me. i'm having the akira brain blast treatment ( what is the deal the priestess is talking about and the victims not being introduced besides priestess i swear a glitch in the matrix it happened im not CRAZY)

Jotaro Kujo

just so i can get it out of my system basically she goes in there they are in a cage she gets them out then quickly go over how each were caught and setting then spawns the weapons saying how they can decide on how the bunny gets treated spare or they kill it it gets mad off that and attacks she easily beats it (because they need to deal with it since it happened to them) and says how she wont interfere and that's why she kicked the priestess for attacking her even tho she said she'd lay back and she what the victims do back this is not intended to be replied to had to get this false memory out my system. now that i say it aloud yeh this was a fake memory lol i guess it helps flesh out the victims? and shows ramia understanding on how they need to act so the trauma of the event doesn't overly effect em past this point either way im done yapping (NOT INTENDED FOR REPLY JUST PEACE OF MIND) feels so good

Jotaro Kujo

it's cut to hugging victim, bunny attack she spawns weapon into their hand and they dog it and the priestess gets them here https://mangadex.org/chapter/882792f4-52eb-4524-b7db-346b65ce9c4b/1 no u remembering most of that is even weirder??? did i witness a special edition? lmao difference being she spawns it at there feet i mean and the rabbit is aggravated at her cockiness (saying they can decide its fate in it's face) and the priestess attacking because of the im not gonna interfere thing also what is that promise she is referring too? this is confusing me even more i was litteraly at peace i made a fake memory and was reading man............... so am i crazy or did some of what u made get lost but i saw it?? do i have bad reading comprhension and memory to the point i can't retain and understand the story?? I must be getting trolled rn ima just read ur awesome story

Jotaro Kujo

looks like a good amount of it was just a few chapters ahead conclusion im impatient................. my bad i'm sorry and with all this yap too 3.85 apology should do