Quality Check (Patreon)

Behold, the project I sidelined because I suck sometimes, maybe, I'm not sure. Complex scenes are hard to make. Anyhoo, what do you guys think? Is this a decent quality for a manga page? I don't have a team behind me, so obviously I can't be busting out One Punch Man level stuff, but maybe this is good?

Side note: this one has a loooooot of Carmen so far...do you guys like Carmen? xD I swear, I know absolutely nothing and am just making stuff blind. xD