Slapstick Together Chapter 1 REBOOT (18) (Patreon)
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Bam! that's the final page for this first chapter of the reboot!
sadly, i still have to go back and REDRAW the first hand full of pages because i drew them too big for the printing later on. and i figured i'd better get them sorted now instead of leaving them for last.
one chapter at a time!
as for this page, it all mostly stayed the same! aside from the final piece of dialogue in the last panel. i wasn't too happy with it, but with this quick fix, now only do i feel it fits nicer, it also continues the little trend i have going on through out the comic where Leo and Magna say similar, or flat out the EXACT same sentence through the story, further driving home the idea that it was "meant to be"~
hehehe
if you recall, on the very first page Leo snarks at Randy after he complains about Leo driving all the way to the store to pick something up instead of buying it Online, to which Leo replies "comin' from the guy readin' a porno magazine"
again, not the exact sentence, but i like the fact that they both give Randy a little sass back, for all the sass he throws at them~
onto the new (technically previous) pages!