OLS - Character Changes / Ep 2 Progress (Patreon)

Hey everyone!

Small update to some work I've done in Our Last Spring.

Just so everyone knows I am writing Episode 2, but I am also editing characters appearances so that they look better.

These are all for characters who have not really had any screen time yet. They will be in the spotlight one day, so I wanted to really give them all makeovers.

Iwatani

Old Look

New Look

Too many characters have green so I wanted them to stand out more. Iwatani now has more red in his hair and his eye color is different.

Yasukawa

Old Look

New Look

Again with the fucking green, I made his hair and eyes match. I also rounded his face and changed up his eye structure.

Bonus: Date Outfit

At the end of episode 1 we see Sakurai go on a date with Ren. I decided to give Yasukawa a date outfit while I was messing around and I think he looks fucking cute.

Mercedes

Old Look

New Look

Obviously the biggest redo is Mercedes. She is in the back of class and is mentioned once by Kat. Mercedes was slapped together to add another body to the classroom and I think it shows.

Now she has more personality and a distinct look.

I am not sure what her role will be in the series but I just wanted to make her look good for when she does get screen time.

Waiter in Episode 2

As part of Ren and Sakurai's date they will eventually need to be waited by someone so I made this cute waiter who is not important.

Episode 2 Progress

Episode 2 is currently at 3846 words. For reference Episode 1 was around 5,000 words. I may end the episode where I have it at the moment but I also may add more if I can think of a good hook for the next episode. 

I hope you all have been enjoying Episode 1. :D

Stay Rad Out There!