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Quick little poll for The Spread Chp 4 (Patreon)

Published:
2024-04-28 13:39:13
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2024-05
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Quick little poll for The Spread Chp 4

  • More corruption focus 54
  • More sex scenes focus 15
  • More both, split into another chapter 87
  • I don't read The Spread 10
  • 2024-04-28
  • —2024-05-05
  • 166 votes
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Content

Hey all, not a super big one, but just wanted to check what are all of your thoughts on this. I'm finishing up the script for The Spread chp 4 and we have ran into a bit of a page limit issue. As much as I want to do like a 30-40 page thing, it ain't too sustainable haha.

There were some feedback of the corruption / transformation thing being too quick and barely there, some people wanted it to be longer and more detailed. So yeap yeap, we're gonna have to choose!

Should I:

Reduce some pages of sex scenes to showcase the corruption more?

Speed up the speed of infection to get to the sex scene?

Or add another chapter to accommodate both?

I thought I couldn't show what I meant by the corruption cause it's NSFW, but looking closer, I can apparently lol, cause it's not showing any NSFW parts. This is what I mean by the corruption process that some people think it's too short and should be longer:

 

 

Comments

Pierrick Buffet

what could be done is that, for example, in the next chapter, corruption takes 1 square to trigger, 1 where the person resists, 1 where the guy explains that she will not be able to escape it by explaining to her why (example: corruption awakens and increases tenfold the primary animal instincts around him like a lion who has several lioness) and then the girl gives in. This solves the need for explanation, makes the process understandable. the reader images more easily what is happening in the process and the whole thing does not overwhelm too much for the next chapters. I hope the message was understood (sorry for my level of English) and that this can help

doggosdoujins
>>136519446

Ah, the scenes isn't about explaining the infection, it more about seeing them resist, trying to fight it etc.