Story before correction 14page (Patreon)

Thank you for your support!

It's finally October.

If I didn't fix the story of the manga in progress, it would have been completed by this time.

Well, finally a convincing story has been completed.

This time I would like to publish a part (14 pages) that has not been released.

The reason is only a part

Actually, I cut and pasted it for the final decision.

Because of that, most of them didn't keep the prototype.

Therefore, the part that barely survived will be released.

My text is hard to read(:s).