Starlight Animated: Test Intro Sequence (Patreon)

I've tested two 3D animation studios and didn't move forward with either of them for lack of quality.

I tried a 2D animation artist for fun, and didn't hate the results.  Please let me know what you think on this style for an animated series.  It's lacking sound and voice acting in the intro, but it's enough to get the gist.  Would this be something you would watch?