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Scene 2 Wip/Preview

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9suqyljp5h7cw2n/TT%20scene%202%20wip001950.avi?dl=0


So first I wanna point out that this is wip so might make some adjustments here and there. Not to mention I still need to pose Trixie's fingers. And right where it cuts off is where there will be some variations/speed changes right up until Twilight pops! Oh and here is scene 1 again for those who forgot or have not seen it. I plan to add tiny bit to the end of it and possibly an intro scene as well.


Scene 1 Wip/Preview

https://www.dropbox.com/s/9qtafdxlorza74g/TTScene1wip.mp4?dl=0


And also some feedback if you don't mind. First is the camera shaking too much? The idea is that Twilight is holding the camera btw. I will have an alternate angles version with her not holding the camera as well.


And Lastly the sound. Is the white noise, fan sounding noise too much? Its coming from the blowjob sounds I used btw. If anything I might just use the same blowjob sounds I used for Twilight in scene 1 if its too annoying. Very limited on bj soundds sadly and wanted to use something different for Trixie.

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Luv2SelfSuck

Would have been awesome to see some self sucking here, lol

SweetGrapes

Alright firstly its looking amazing, secondly..the "White noise" In WIP 2 video almost sounds like you're on an airplane lol. I think I understand better then anyone your pain though for the BJ sounds having that damn noise when you try to be creative. Though I have to say that while there is almost certainly some noise..this one is pretty damn loud and hard to ignore. Okay and now then..I realize this might seem silly, and I know you mentioned a version without it..I love the idea behind Twilight holding a camera..but when the view changes you can see that she isn't holding one..so I think you'd either have to leave the entire scene Twilight's POV for the camera version to make it seem legit..or animate Twilight holding a camera, which seems difficult. I wanna express again that I totally love the idea of this scene and how well its shaping up..I just wanted to give you my opinions =).

Andrew Rowe

Good stuff! SweetGrapes is right, amazing work.

blackjrXIII

Which reminds me you would not happen to have any good bj sounds would ya xD? True, true. I guess I will change it for the final and just have the camera idea as fun little bonus angle version thing.

blackjrXIII

Thanks just need to change the airplane bj sounds in the final for sure lol. I got those sounds from some random site btw, can't remember where though.

Anonymous

awesome

Spatsonar

How sweet for Trixie to do this for her rival, so gentle. Also if i may, when Twilight 'pops' can some cum escape through Trixies nose as well as her mouth, and will you have two cumshots both in and out as an option? Or both? Either is fine with me.

MasterBrony

Nice work so far. The white nose is fine just without the high ringing, so just turn it down a bit, should barely be heard but still there.

Anonymous

I'm loving it so far. Will this be different angles or one long clip? Personally I like the clips of different angles for video-making, but either way I hope we get mutual climaxes from these two. <3

blackjrXIII

Its gonna be one long clip like the Halloween special. But I will have 2 different angles versions.

Sirius Face

In regards to the sound, that "Yeesh" from Trixie sounds off. Like it's not coming from her but from a zombie lol. It's kind of scary. The other noises from the blowjob sound a little far away. Either that or Twilight is having zero problems with taking Trixie's huge cock that far into her throat. But aside from that, camera is fine and the models look good. Can't wait to see how this all turns out ^_^

f40f50

Its looking really good Black, but the white noise is a little to loud on the Trix BJ sounds in #2. :( There is a little in #1, but its not going to kill it. But every thing other then that, 9.5 out of 10. ;) Keep up all the good work and don't kill your self. I'd hate to see you burn out. lol :)

blackjrXIII

Thanks! And yeah I am gonna change the bj sounds for scene 2. I won't burn myself out don't worry but thanks for your concern though :).