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Hard to believe it but I penned the last words to book 1. Going to send a week going through all 96 chapters (plus epilogue).

After that review / edit, I’ll start writing book 2

Its a weird feeling but in coming week i have a request if you have time and are willing.


1st if you are willing, tell me things you like and dislike so far. I know there is still 40 chapters which covers a ton of ground. If something from early on still is in your mind, making you wonder about something let me know. I would love to make sure im crossing T’s and dotting i’s.


2nd i will probably be dropping a few extra chapters. I know. Most of you dont want extra chapters but too bad.


3rd im working on combing my goblin and dragon books into one patron and making all future books / stories under that same one.


Enjoy your weekend and ty again!

Comments

Brandon Baier

My one critique would be that sometimes it feels a little too righteous. Like he’s consistently making really good choices that have really good outcomes. I am talking outside of the combat. A lot of the stuff with the public speaking and bar. Would maybe feel a little more natural if he was making more mistakes or things weren’t working out as well.

AuthorShawnWilson

Solid point - struggling with the MC who wins but also experiences loss (ie the loss of Luca and others (later chapters)). Lifestone stuff will hit huge late late but plays a role. If you had to pick a few spots already past to fail, where would you think they work best?

Shotgun_Samura13

My ONLY, and I mean ONLY issue. Is the length of the chapters. Wish they were longer, but not everyone can be PirateAba with the Wandering Inn. Lol. Great everything else though.

Shotgun_Samura13

Like seriously. Everything else is absolutely beautiful. 💯 You've started an epic story here and I hope it continues to be as amazing if not more than book 1