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I'll try to get a post going with the changes I've made to book 3.

After a lot of conversation with many of you and some of my Royal Road base, as well as hiring a developmental editor for book 3, I have changed the story up enough, that I want to release those chapters again that I fixed.

I'll Release a LONG Section.  For those wondering, I removed the loss of a child (Ava won't lose that child because she wont be pregnant).  

So many mentioned how that moment made them pull away from the story.  If that moment breaks everything, then I wanted to find a different way to express the same story and ending, just without that point.


Stay tuned for a long update (and I'll go ahead and copy/paste all the new chapters back in).  

It will mean chapters are going to change as I deleted a few (obv ones dealing specifically with the loss of the child).

Thank you again for trusting me with your feelings and thoughts.  Know I always want to learn to write the best story possible and hear what you say!

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Mario Schade

Not sure I like the change at the moment. The situation had an impact on various characters, the general character level and is not a small change. It had weight, even if I didn't find the way Kaen caused it "perfect", it was an important event. You can only tell after the changes have been made, but for now I'm confident that the new version will work. Bringing about a similar hard break for Kaen, Ava and their family as well as in connection with the dragons and their eggs. Hmm. It will be difficult i think.