Yuzu Drowning redrawn (Patreon)

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Maybe some of you remember the pic of Yuzu from about 10 years ago where she's using her sword's grip to pleasure herself. A friend asked me to redraw that when I asked him what he wants for Christmas. I'm very happy he asked me to redraw this pic. I like the idea but the old pic was far from perfect. Not too difficult to draw something better. She now looks less like a Simpsons character. Less yellow. XD I think the new version is pretty decent but it feels like some parts are off. Pretty sure the anatomy, pose,expression and colors could be better, I just can't do it yet. I'm quite happy with the results but I hope I can improve it even further when I redraw it again in 2029. :3
There is also a Relena version using her bubblebath bottle instead of the sword coz Relena is pretty and we both like her. :)

Relena is from Gundam
Yuzu is my OC