original comic drafts, update (Patreon)

here´s the original comic ive been working on.

right off the bat, there are already changes that will be made during the inking and editing period. the first pages are horribly out of place, so sadly, the Chad character will not make an appearance on the final version. plus id rather dedicate those pages to flesh out our two protagnists a bit more.

the tone of the story was also inspired by a doujin i read recently. the story was very sweet and when the characters got to the sex, it was very intense, and i loved that, so i wanted to sort of capture that feeling, although i did go a bit overboard with the dialogue during sex, so i´ll tone down the dumb porn talk, and as usual, redraw some of the panels i feel need more work.

anyway, this isnt the final product, but i thought it would be nice to share the progress so far. i hope ya´ll enjoy it.

i cant really say when i´ll get to edit it, since the bulma comic is top priority right now, so i hope this is enough, til further notice.

i also decided that i wont scrap "mother´s responsibility", since ive changed the characters so much, i might as well just make the original design a character of her own, and go through with that story, but, once again, that´ll be something to work on after i finish the comic commissions ive held on for the past 2 years, due to my prior lack of time managment.

that´ll be all for today. cheers!

edit: please let me know, if ya´ll are fine with the patreon image galleries or you prefer the old imgur galleries, for a better reading expirience.

another edit: i figured that the patreon gallery would be subpar since it´s a fairly new addition, so i´ll leave the imgur link here