First results of the art critique streams! (+TIER feedback wanted!) (Patreon)

THE STARS ARE ALIGNED SORRY FOR THE DELAY I FINALLY REMEMBERED TO POST AT A DECENT HOUR!!!
Before I say anything else, please don't offer any further critique of the art above in the comments UNLESS the artist comments asking for it! I was very careful to try and give each artist the feedback they specifically wanted, let's respect that!
So here's the results of the first test art critique livestreams! In order of original piece -> my adjustments piece -> my adjustments and so on and so on! The first 4 were done in the first stream, the 5th was split between the first and second stream, and the last 3 were done in the second stream! You can watch those again here if you'd like to hear how I talked through my thought process! https://youtube.com/live/YtpSTJI9ST8 https://youtube.com/live/cqzzk9yYM7Q
We tried to adopt a system where we only briefly went over the pieces of artists who weren't in the chat at the time, and I'm including the psd and clip files of all my edits which include the layers of my changes and any of the studies I might've done based on the artists inspiration list to help me adjust their piece to their taste!

I believe we are going to do this again next month! We're going to create a new google form with updated questions to help the critique process, expect that sometime early next month!

If anyone who attended the stream has any feedback for how we can better host them in the future, that's something I'd love to hear! And for full transparency, the current idea behind these streams is that we may want to open a new tier for patreon in 2024 that would be higher than the $10 tier (currently we're thinking somewhere between $15 and $25), other hypothetical plans for that new tier include being able to submit for ocs to be potentially redesigned by me in a future video series, and maybe even a monthly podcast from my team! Any ideas of feedback on the ideas for this new tier are 100% welcome!