Twat Talk 2: The Threesome (Patreon)

I was just thinking about adding a picture here like my other posts, but Patreon has rules about what they allow in their "Public" released posts, and so nothing. Just imagine in your heads that I'm naked on the couch and the mic is near my pussy where I stuck googly eyes.

I'm not gonna talk out of my vag long, but thinking over Becoming Monsters 11, I felt it would be good to open up about what I believe is the weirdest chapter in the book.

I didn't wake up one day and say "I am an erotica author!" That wasn't the goal. I've written hundreds of false starts for fiction over the years, amounting to hundreds of thousands of chapters that won't see the light of day. I wanted to be an AUTHOR, not necessarily a lewd one. I tinkered with multiple drafts with BM and did that for over 2 years. Then I got laid off and suddenly I had all the time in the world, so I decided to just write. Chapter 1 happened in a few hours. I added a few things to it later, but it is largely the same first chapter.

Now, I didn't have a completed outline yet. HOWEVER, I had other outlines from other versions of BM, and I used those as a guide until I sat down and worked out what I wanted the story to be. This took a while, and didn't get done until around the time I was in the middle of Chapter 11.

All this time, it was at this point I slowly realized I might finish this. Then I would publish it! EEK!! I had a mini panic attack, and dove into a lot of research.

Yes, I read porn for research. Masturbation was involved.

I learned a lot about what was working and what wasn't. I read most of Three Square Meals and while I think his used of mind control is rape and his sex scenes sicken me, I could appreciate his ability to craft scifi battle scenes. Ironically, I skipped the sex in his writing entirely and realized good prose beat out whatever the sex was. Annabelle Hawthorne was more enjoyable, though she only had the one book at the time.

What does this have to do with Chapter 11? Well, 10 and 11. Anyway, while I didn't agree with TSM or any other of the normal smut, I got it in my head I needed to have a normal sex scene, as in with a guy. I decided on a threesome, and maybe add a bit of indirect adopted parents of Diane. Not my kink, but if I wanted to sell I needed to make something people wanted?

I wrote it out, but 10 and 11 and the most heavily edited chapters because of making sure what I said or did or making it clear a thing was done in a proper order. But after 2 years, I read the chapters with a bit of cringe. I thing they are great for giving a deeper story for Diane and indirectly letting the reader know that powers come with consequences. Phil and Georgia are important side characters for the whole series, but...it still reads awkward to me, which I guess is a bit of the point?

After the interlude with Solomon I was off to the races, but I'll get there when we get there. Still editing Therapy 7p2, will be out soon.

This has been another vigorous edition of Twat Talk. Queefing Out!