Bad End in Proofreading (Patreon)

Like Opportunity Struck, I'm now pushing Bad End into the proofreading phase. There are a lot of sections I can touch up and expand upon, but for now I'm going to enable everyone to share their thoughts and comments on the Doc itself as they please.

 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1p8ck6q8Rxxk6v7l8zzNEv3tYhvMsBIAh2ZlbNuViITo/edit?usp=sharing 

I don't expect any huge changes, except possibly moving the Kelly's first meeting with her sister from Bad End to Opportunity Struck. I'd also like to expand on that scene in general as the characters aren't as fleshed out as I'd like, but there's a lot on my plate this season.

I'm also toying with the idea of starting work on Chapter 7, but just about every single aspect of that chapter includes / involves massive spoilers as we reach the story climax, and I don't want to ruin anything for anyone. Might start posting teasers for it in the new year. Maybe an early Christmas teaser? Not sure yet.