Quick news (Patreon)

Hi!

I'm still working on HS Tutor, I wanted to have the update ready this month, but there's still a lot to do. Here are the planned scenes for now:

1. Ursula 1: 100% (Ursula, Charlotte and Garnet)
2. Ursula 2: 100% (same)
3. Ursula 3: 100% (Ursula and Zoe)
4. Zoe, Dorothy and MIla: 50%
5. Ursula 4: 0% (school swimming test)
6. Ursula 5: 0% (sex)
7. Jasmine 1: 0% (Ursula's mom)
8. Jasmine 2: 0%

Here the improvement in scripts:

1. Kelly (100%)
2. Megan (100%)
3. Charlotte (100%)
4. Claire (50%)
5. Scarlett (75%)
6. Garnet (0%)

The fixing scripts part is pretty demotivating, I have to be honest. But it has to be done. Unfortunately, when I fixed the previous scripts like Zoe's, Mila's, Amelia's, I was less concerned with actually improving the text and more concerned with just removing serious errors. In these new scripts, however, I decided that it was necessary to fix the most annoying things. I already talked about some of the details in the last post, but there are other things I'm trying to improve.

For example, one thing that I find annoying and that happens quite often is the following situation:

Girl: *Make some kind of statement.*
MC: "Really?"
Girl: *Pretty much saying the same thing.*

I don't know why the hell - I think it's an addiction of mine - but there's a huge amount of times that this happens and it's totally unnecessary. When you start paying attention to it, it becomes annoying. I remove that stuff wherever possible, so the text looks better and the MC looks less mentally challenged.

Another thing that happened a lot in older scripts, like Claire's, is that the MC makes judgments through thoughts in the middle of scenes. Another completely unnecessary thing, especially since a lot of the judgments are banal, or are things that even make the MC look like a dick. I'm removing all unnecessary "thoughts" and replacing them with normal conversations where instead of the MC saying things to himself, he says the same thing to the character he's interacting with, who reacts to what's been said.

Finally, Claire's script is so old that MC and Zoe still called Mila "Mila" instead of "[mila_title]" which is the role the player chooses for Mila.

But you see, I know these things aren't that important, the most important thing is the erotic scenes, but unfortunately the old scripts kind of annoy me, and I won't have peace of mind until I finally revise them all. Even if the final result is not a masterpiece of high literature, I think it will be a bit more acceptable and less annoying in some cases. And it's not like I need months to review them either, I need like 15 hours of uninterrupted work for each script, but it's quite hard for me to concentrate too much on this task without starting to lose focus, that's why this part is so bad, it makes me less productive than I could be.

On the status of HS Tutor and the future of the game

With Ursula's scenes, pretty much all the characters will have their stories told. There's still the principal, and I had planned for her to have 2 or 3 daughters, but I'm seriously starting to think about making her have no children and just adding her scenes, which will be quests for the MC to do at the school, involving the other characters. There are also secondary characters, like the girl from the brothel, but I don't know exactly what I'm going to do with her yet.

I feel like HS Tutor is already at a point where it's not that exciting anymore, so I think the best thing to do after Ursula and the principal is to move on to the endings and the group scenes. There's also a list of scenes that have been requested over time that I plan to add:

1. a new scene with Claire and her mom
2. a scene where Zoe and Mila have lesbian sex (but without looking like NTR)
3. anal sex with Mila
4. boobjob with Garnet and Dorothy
5. accidental creampie with Rachel (Amelia and Madeline's mom)
6. sex education class where Mila demonstrates her ineptitude as a teacher and ends up doing things like teaching the girls how to kiss, etc.

Regarding Solvalley, Honeymoon Island and the yet unnamed future project, I will leave to talk (and think) about them after I finish the current HS Tutor update.

Zoe shows Ursula the game "Koikatu", and the model she made of herself, who looks 100% like the "real world" Zoe, but has giant boobs.

Zoe tries to look hardcore and suggests some inappropriate things to Garnet. Garnet's mom hears Zoe's suggestion and decides to teach the naughty girl a "sexual" lesson, with the help of the MC and Mila.