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Rough Drafts (Patreon)

Published:
2023-02-07 13:05:27
Imported:
2023-12
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More half assed ideas for comics, nice and rough. Please enjoy.

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Anonymous

I like the second one. I just think it needs even more umph. I imagine zooming out to see how he flattens the whole stadium or something

Anonymous

No birthday hat on panel 3. Please do better.

Anonymous
>>101367867

Yeah, I was thinking a little aling these lines. I'd say maybe drop the 2nd panel (or combine his response, "ok" or a shrug, with him preparing like the 3rd panel), and add a 4th where you see some reaction to him for the punchline (maybe the singer's jaw drops, maybe people around him are staring in fright/disgust/annoyance, maybe he looks embarrassed as whoever stares).