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Ok, here we go with this two parts mini story. It shows what Rebecca didn't see and what's happening with her siblings.

I will edit a bit this later and I'll prepare a zip file for you to downlaod everything if you wish.

If you notice spells mistakes or sentences that need to be fixed please let me know.


Update: fixed text (thanks for suggestions guys), added title and watermarks. Zip file available for download


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Anonymous

Second panel, have "assurance" written down when it should be "insurance".

Andrew

On page two, did you mean insurance instead of assurance? on page four, you could change the line to "back to the lab." I can't wait to see the results of drinking the vial

Aeship89

Yessss! 1. Welcome back. 2. Love this twist

williamg

excellent story line

Topcat

Nice!

Anonymous

nice, please continue this one

Ethan Rouse

I wonder what Miranda did to keep him quiet...

Topcat

looking forward to part 2