Augmented Aspects Book 1 Cover? (Patreon)

Good morning everyone,

Just so you know, I have kept my promise of trying to get some of these series picked up. Since no legitimate offers have come forth from established vendors, I am doing the Independent route, and have decided to start with Augmented Aspects.

I know, before this gets too big I want ALEXiThymiA to also be published, but I want that one done right. So I am holding out for a book company to see this work and eventually pick up the series.

Thus we are going with Augmented Aspects.

Here is the sketch for book 1, meaning we can add in more details as we want. I have a few, but I figured I'd get a general quick take on what you think and what you might want in book 1.

I thought about the skydiving scene, but that was going to cause a lot of problems.