Patreon Exclusive Script Comparison: Camping and Cuddling with Your Tough Girl Companion (Patreon)

Hiya, Patrons! It's the time again: time for another script comparison post! Toldja I'd be getting a bunch out soon! ^^

In case you don't remember my goals when editing/expanding a script, I wrote a long post about that ages ago right over here!

The basic gist if you want to skip that: I want scripts to be as strong, engaging, youtube-friendly and on-brand as possible when I perform them. I've been very lucky that writers have let me (lovingly) mangle their work to shape their stories to fit my channel best and help make them more unique! It's tough to stand out when ASMRtists/VAs perform the same scripts multiple times, and my solution is weird performance/sound design choices and cheap jokes. It's worked for me so far!

This time out we have one of my favorite "tough girl" scripts: Camping and Cuddling with Your Tough Girl Companion! 

It's a post-apocalyptic audio that came out way back in 2022. It didn't do too well, but it remains a favorite underdog of mine, and is one of the scripts I've performed that got a huge facelift. This was another script I loved that would have only been around five minutes of finished audio without expansion, so I thought it'd be nice to have a look at the before/after!

Here's the original ASMR Script Haven post for this script by Succubusslayer69!

Now, let's get to it!

Comparison:

• Camping and Cuddling with Your Tough Girl Companion!: Video

• Camping and Cuddling with Your Tough Girl Companion!: Original Script vs. Expanded

Behind the Scenes Bonus: thumbnail breakdown!