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Matsumoto's Bad day (Patreon)

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2016-02-18 03:19:27
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Special thx for commission from  kisame17 for this good story. 




This comic get along very well with my bleach series.

This is the reason why Rangiku love milk pump. >.<

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"I can't believe I don't have just only one minute to take a break" is somewhat awkward sounding. Remove the "just" or "only". "It looks like they produce faster than yesterday" should probably be "It looks like they're producing faster then yesterday", though you could argue for either "then" or "than" in this context. "I have to drain it out before my breasts are getting too big" is again a bit awkward. Go with "I have to drain it out before my breasts are too big" or "I have to drain it out before my breasts get too big". Lastly, "Your milk is some kind of special type" is again a bit awkward, "There's something special about your milk" flows better, "type" is a bit odd here.