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July '19 GA: Jade and Bran (Patreon)

Published:
2019-08-31 14:34:37
Imported:
2023-09

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Giftart for AtwistedLogic.

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Anonymous

Hello, this looks very different then what I thought he it would look like when done. In the WIP it looked all lovey-dovey but now with color the atmosphere is completely different. I was imagining a more bright pinkish background. But this dark one looks of course waay better. Also the lighting and the shadows cast on the characters bodies look very well. Brans character design looks very well. I mean he looks like hes about 25, hits the gym 2 times a week and cares for his Girlfriend. His facial expression however is a bit interesting. If you look at the whole character it fits pretty well, but if you just look at the face alone and ignore the rest he seems a bit insecure like a young teenager. Jade is a whole different story. Her face also is pretty interesting. When ignoring the whole she looks very mature, but when looking at the whole her face looks a bit younger. Which is a good thing. In any case she seems a bit exhausted, which works pretty well with her pregnancy. I can only imagine, but I believe this is taking up quite a lot of her energy. However. sadly I seem to have missed that in the WIP, but her body/pose does not at all look natural. I see what you tried there, but her upper back sticks out waay to far. and her shoulders/arms seem misplaced. I think the back should be a bit more flat, and the shoulders should be a little further back as on most of the poses the neck should never be behind the shoulders. I am unsure with where her breast is supposed to be, I think I should be a bit further up, but it may be that it would solve itself if the back and sholders would sit differently. Apart from that Jade also looks like shes hitting the gym regulary, I mean heer arms do seem to be quite strongly. All in all it is a pretty good Artwork. I like the motive, only the poses need improvement. Good job :-)

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Wow, thanks so much for the detailed review, yes i must say sometimes, my WIP may change quite abit from the final drawing. But i'm definitely open to sorts of criticism if it means i can learn from it and get better over time. I do agree perhaps the poses are a little stiff and not as natural as I would like it to be, but i suppose i'll keep it in mind and try harder next time!