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Did a couple of other raffle suggestions as well, though this time as requests.

Included an extra sketch of Adult Hinata as well, which I initially did before remembering that Shipp?den was a thing.

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arsonisticness

I love everything you do with Hinata wow. I'd vote to have both colored of course but if I had to choose, I'd say the MILF

arsonisticness

This is kind of a silly request but do you think you could add some onomatopoeia to these? She mentions her farts being loud so that would emphasize it nicely. And for the milf one maybe just like a super long droning fart because she's been holding it.

Charles W

I kinda agree with Arson. Onomatopoeia would be great as an extra detail!

Lazei

Sure thing. Do you have any specific sounds here that I can use?

arsonisticness

Hm well for the giantess one I can see her ripping a large cluster of noisy, bassy farts (since she's sitting on the bed). So if you were to stick onomatopoeia to that I would think something with a lot of B's and then vowels. Ex: BBBbbbbbBBBBBBBRRUUHMMPPPPT! BbrraaaahhhHHHHTT! Etc. For the MILF one, she mentions that she held it in all morning so this fart is probably super long and bubbly. When I'm writing bubbly farts I like to put an M in front of the onomatopoeia to create a 'gulpy' fart effect. Ex: mmmmmmMMMMMMMLLLLAAAABBBBBNVVPPPPBBNTT! Not sure if that was the kind of advice you were looking for but I hope that helps. I would study the way pepperspot sunshine does onomatopoeia, how he phrases them. Like he'll write some of the letters small and then big to show that that the fart gets louder and it makes it more dynamic.