Question! (Patreon)

I'm giving the Oni a bit of a story so the build up will be longer than the others
This is the first time I will be doing a muscular woman thing so I've provided her with a deeper voice and talks a bit more than others about her body and physique and how the viewer needs more muscle on them etc
She talks about being able to crush them and break them in half if they even think about stepping out of line
Eventually she remembers that she had wanted to experience sex as a human but was unable to due to being an oni now after her death and most fear her

For a first attempt at doing a BIG STRONG WOMAN how do you think the audio will do?

Do you think I did well?