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Published:
2023-03-04 16:22:11
Imported:
2023-03
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Please let me know if there is any strange English.😚

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Anonymous

English looks good! Waste not, want not ☝️

Anonymous

3rd panel- 'enpty’ should be 'empty. ‘Empty can of chocolate’ is a bit contradictory as if it’s empty isn’t not a ‘can of chocolate’ like an empty glass isn’t an ‘empty glass of water’ as there’s no water in it. Empty chocolate tin(I think that’s what it is in the picture) might work better. But none of that stops the comic from being fun and great!

Anonymous

Yes :)

N.R. Rowley

The English is all correct.

Anonymous

Going to be full of bits and bobs soon, 99% of a tins life is supposed to be void of chocolates