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Hello everyone, 

You voted for what you wanted first, Breast expansion won out. Here is chapter one for you all, let me know what you think, Chapter 2 will be out tomorrow :) 

Edit: Correct version Upload :) 

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Samwise

A bit short for a chapter I guess but it's just the intro. There's a few places where you use "you" as if you're talking to the reader, but this doesn't make sense. It has potential though. Just not enough content to really comment on it.

GrowingDesires

Thanks for the feedback, upon re-reading, I uploaded the version before a proof read :P I've just corrected it :D