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Burrows Build 0.2 (PC/Mac) (Patreon)

Published:
2021-11-20 22:22:31
Imported:
2022-01

Content

Enjoy! The updates are as follows:
-New Title Screen
-Story Update (Mark Day 2)

-CTC/UI Updates

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1wE3ZXoY8fEKV3E5sWKXt_e5wWoAH4cxv?usp=sharing

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Comments

Unagi

The Background Noise in the first café scene is considered music when it should be sound.

Unagi

sugar cubes is two words not one.

Unagi

"Yes, very observant, Mr.Grey!" There should be a space after "Mr."

Unagi

light headed should be hyphenated.

Unagi

Maybe I haven't been to NYC enough but seeing someone refer to the Empire State Building to a newcomer as "Empire State" seems a little weird.

Unagi

earshot is one word not two

Yuki

Loved this build! Keep up the great work ♥

Unagi

I just remembered that Grey uses the word "helicopters" but I don't think those were invented during or before Prohibition.

Unagi

Cajun should be capitalized.

Unagi

There is a part near the end where Mark's goes from his Robe Sprite to his Fully Dressed Sprite without any explanation. There is part where Mark says that is "Sunday" even though the title card says "Monday" "I didn't want to talk about it, but it happened 3 years ago." It is a little weird seeing the number 3 when the word "twenty" appeared a few lines ago.