ART CRITIQUE: Do You Wanna Build A SnowMon? (Patreon)

Post yesterday's voting, I started working on this today. Though I can't lie, I'm not quite sure how I feel about it just yet.

The idea is there, I am quite happy with it, but not sure if it's enough. I'd love to know what you all think. ANY feedback would be appreciated. 

To be fair, I think it would look extra adorable as an embroidery patch. Just saying~