Dormir Test [FEEDBACK WANTED Sleep Track Audio Proof of Concept] (Patreon)

I've been wanting to do Dormir audio for about a year now but it's an intimidating prospect. I think the only way I'm gonna  get it to where I wanted is by...doing it often! So I'm going to be uploading a few test tracks of me futzing with Dormir's voice and general atmos to Patreon for you guys to give me feedback on! 

Nothing about this vocal tone, background track style etc is final! Comment with your thoughts below on this format for the audios (Basically sleep tours and stories), voice, feeling, vibe, etc!