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So I sat down to write a Naffur chapter, and I had some of the comments from the prior chapters in mind about side stories, and ultimately I decided to cut Naffur's interludes out of the main release storyline. 

I made him for a reason, and that will be very important for the next arc. But I'm two weeks out from full time writing and I won't finish this arc in two weeks. So the text I wrote today will go into a larger side story (which I will have time to actually do come January) which I will release on here as an extra.

But anyways, no chapters tonight. But I did outline the end of this arc. I had made a lot of plot points and not tied them together, so it was somewhat taxing. I'll do my best to get three chapters out tomorrow. On the agenda is checking in with the tournament and Shal, and then Rand's glorious return.

Thanks,

PuddZ

Comments

CallOut4

Dood... Didn't you promise 4 chapters on Sunday...

CallOut4

Not judging or anything

ElectricintheForest

Naffur has actually been growing on me since he's met up with Arbor, but I'm glad you made this decision. A story like his is hard to digest in frequent, flow-breaking pieces. A few larger chunks will help it come to a resolution quicker, and I think it will be more obvious that it's important.

Anonymous

I am so happy that Naffur was cut for now, honestly I liked him when I didn't see through his point of view, I think he would be a really good character, one who is important and pivitol. However I didn't like the Naffur POV that is all. Thanks for the heads up and gl w/ the atourny job.

Anonymous

When you release a few chapters at a time and they only contain side characters or alternate plot lines it's harder for me to put it into the context of the narrative as a whole. I'm sure if I read the last 20 and next 20 chapters it would all flow better. But the side story idea seems a brilliant fix for those who have issues with pacing or the amount of attention paid to Naffur. Thanks for finding a win-win solution. We still get the Naffur backstory, but get to stay closer to Randidly to close out this Arc.

Aesoir

Title non rand chapters as interludes.. also consider making non mc chapters longer... ie 3x or more... it wont be as aggrieved

pukeofhurl

See i agree with this ive actually been just straight up skipping naffur chapters since the robbery... and i dont think ive lost anything for the randidly side because of that... like theres no referances or anything to it so i figured it was just detached from the story... it would also be nice though if you compiled them together since going back to find them is very hard to do on patreon

Anonymous

Thanks for moving Naffur to the side