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Hey all,

In the interest of clarifying some in the last four chapters, I added a bit of text to the scenes. Not enough to change the outcomes, but it shifted the character of what happened.

For example, I made it more obvious that in my mind, Randidly's real struggle in the fight was a mental decision. I also added a bit more detail to the image. Etc.

I'll be back with some wrap up and explanation chapters tomorrow!

Comments

Anonymous

The whole sequence definitely flows a lot better now. Keep it up Puddles.

ElectricintheForest

Wow, I didn't read until after the update, so I was a bit surprised at some of the comments. This makes more sense now.