VigoraVinum Ep2 quick preview (Patreon)

This preview is of a scene I had in my head for a while, that maybe only I find ridiculously funny. Context is Ciann giving an overview of the experiences of the group that lead up to her encounter with Lia, with this being either framed as part of the school tour, or recalling a specific incident with Vaias.

While I say I've made progress on VVEp2, it's really more that I staged scenes for this ages ago, and when I was a lot less comfortable with modifying the models for the scenes. Hell, the entire Lia/Ciann scene uses an old model for both of them, and I hope to hell no one notices too much.

When I was planning on doing Ep2 as a standalone, the framework of the entire episode was as a story Ciann is relaying back to the reader as an active diary entry. But now that I want to combine it with Episode 3, I'm afraid it might end up being a weird tonal shift, from something that happened and being told to us, to something that's happening currently (like while Ciann is telling the story). Or do you think such a framework would work ok to break up the scenes anyway?