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While no one sees FullHD (Patreon)

Published:
2022-08-20 22:22:08
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2023-07-02 21:24:45
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"I continued to follow her into the bushes, but I still fear that I might accidentally meet her brothers during the process. They are unlikely to enjoy this event... However, her offer was too tempting, especially after several hours of frank conversation. And her scent!... Oh.. it's just beautiful!"

Sound ver.: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LyeyoUvIX3heyYOrAbJLPoWAI8E0eOWA/view?usp=sharing

Hello guys! I have a small but very juicy animation for you. Happy viewing!

From you, as always, I will wait for your reactions and feedback. 🤍

Since there is still enough time before the end of the month, I will have time to draw one more animation for you.

And I began to notice that many authors try to come up with background stories for their art, and as a result, this very often decorates the main work, gives you the opportunity to look at the picture the way the author looked at it during creation, especially if you have a well-developed visual fantasy .

I know that my English is still a bit rough for long texts, but I want to try. Through this, I may be able to provide viewers with the emotions and history of the art. But I'm sure it takes a long time to write a really good story and describe emotions well.

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Dargon

Very juicy indeed! There must have been a lot of pressure built up inside her for such an eruption when he pulled out, haha! I see what you mean now by 'not a person' since it seems to be our lovely dragon Sisu, but I wrote that so that it would be accurate whatever the gender of the being underneath him, rather than implying they were human, heh. It is still a happy surprise to see her featured again! The sounds are lovely as ever (fleshy without being silly), and the animation is very smooth. I again appreciate the attention to detail; during the slow penetration he is using his legs, but the fast/hard penetration you can see his belly rise before the thrust, indicating he adding force with his abs. Were that we were all so lucky to have strong bodies like him! I had already mentioned the details in the weight of the balls, but in color, it is easy to see how much effort has gone into the connection with the body as well. The are only two minor comments I might say. Selfishly, I had hoped to hear some moans from the lady (since Sisu is so fun), but I realize this would be more sound searching for you. Secondly, being able to see the aftermath of the climax for a second or two would have been nice, but it also does not make sense with the timing of the 'whiteout'. Again, very minor things. I know this was a small project and it's great for the amount of time spent! Having background stories is indeed a wonderful way to enhance animations that do not have speaking voices. It is a very human thing to want to connect a story moment with a visual and vice-versa; it is deeply satisfying on a primal level! I've said before, your English is very good and I do not think you would have a problem being understood. However, writing a story is tricky even for native speakers, so there would indeed be some learning. I am not a professional editor, but I have helped several people in the past with editing and proofreading (one I have been helping for over five years, and help to this day). I would be joyous to be able to help you create the stories, or simply review them afterward! Definitely send me something on Patreon DM or Discord should that sound appealing Thanks again for sharing your work!

manfromearth
>>90000995

Thank you very much for the detailed answer! For me, this is really important. I now want to have time to finish one more animation before the end of the month and after that, in addition to the fact that I will start writing down my plan for the next month in my notes. I want to practice writing stories for already drawn art. I may not publish even these stories, but practice is necessary. And I would be happy to discuss this topic with you later.