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Only one chance (P.16) SKETCH (Patreon)

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2022-04-11 20:42:27
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2023-07-02 22:25:48
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Dargon

Mmmph, that first panel is really wonderful, the x-ray was a great choice, plus it clarifies just how big his equipment is. The second panel looks a little bit off to me, however. It's hard to say why exactly, but is his snout a littler shorter than it should be? I still -love- the expression, though, seeing that much tongue emphasizes how strong the feeling is. Thank you again for continuing to work, I hope you're managing okay.

manfromearth
>>81744833

Thanks for the feedback. I want to try to add one detail to him - when he wrinkles, his muzzle narrows. This can be seen, for example, in dogs. However, in this case, I'm still thinking about changing this slide a bit.

Dargon
>>81744833

The wrinkled snout is a good detail, and I think you did it well! The height and width of the snout is okay, just the length seems slightly too short. When dogs snarl, it pulls their nose back on top of the snout, which exposes the front gums/teeth. That may look too aggressive, so maybe you can have his lip stretch across the upper jawbone? In other words, maybe stretch the bone under the lip forward so it thins out his lip slightly? I apologize if I gave the wrong impression, it is a nice drawing! I a not an artist, so my advice may be bad.

manfromearth
>>81744833

I decided to tweak this slide a bit. I'll post the finished episode in a few minutes. ;)