Carvalle: School of Psychopaths Revamped! (Patreon)

CSOP is undergoing major editing, here’s what to expect!

• Spelling mistakes will be corrected.

• Authors’ notes will be deleted, except the warnings.

• There will be a chapter dedicated to listing down a playlist that relates to the story.

• Miles’ internal homophobia in the original was from pressures of society and desires of a traditional family. This will be changed so we can focus on his trauma.

• SaLu’s diagnosis will be taken more seriously. The original has innacurate diagnoses that doesn’t match their overall behavior.

• The Caste Game will be more relevant in the long run. The hierarchy became irrelevant around Chapter 25, and there will be a scene where the hierarchy is announced. Zeus will be the Jack (He wasn’t placed anywhere in the original).

• Miles will express desire for SaLu (being less forced) since he is starting to embrace his sexuality.

• Where Heidi got his knives will be clarified. It will still be a mystery, but one that makes sense.

• SaLu’s communication will solely be sign language. So at the scene of SaLuHa’s first meeting together, (Zeus is behind Miles) the room will not be dark.

• Nougat will be more persistent in the first half. Miles will not be the one to voluntarily kiss him, but Nougat forced him. Miles would take the blame to save Nougat, which will develop N into having genuine appreciation for him.

• Miles’ personality will focus on being nice and considerate; his anxiety will be nerfed (decreased). Instead of anxious, he will act clueless in the first chapters.

• The Mall scene where Miles sees Zeus with a child: he feared that he might not be able to give them that image of a family. This will be changed into reminicince of how Miles used to have a loving family when he was a child. Then, he will be motivated into giving the brothers the family that they deserve.

• Instead of throw-away lines, Miles will get flashbacks of the time in the Levough to give readers a full image of what had happened in the past year.

• What happened to Class 4-A and Carvalle’s survivors will be clarified. The ”In Another World” ending will be deleted.

• CSOP will also be uploaded here under the tag, CSOP Official. It will act as a back up incase something happens to the book in Wattpad.

Thank you for enjoying CSOP, we will be taking that book seriously and giving it the revamp it deserves!

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